Wow! The perfect Kid Icarus Fan Art!
Me fav!

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I'm not doing requests anymore, but Art-trades are okay.

You consistently produce really good artwork. This is no different.

But if you're truly worried about atmosphere, he are some common things to look out for.

You wanted Palutena to appear more important, but Pit has a much stronger color and takes up as much canvas as she does, and he is also relatively the same size. They are placed side-by-side, so it's hard for one to be stronger than the other.

If you're worried, think about what the audience will think. Specifically about where and how you draw the characters will affect the audience.

For example, think of this:
Putting non-shaded Pit in the front and Palutena further away, still shaded, would have implied a lower-class soldier fighting for his celestial Goddess. Putting Pit in the back and Palutena in the front with the same shading would have implied that she was thinking about the cute but plain Pit.

I hope this helps. Again, this is really good.

I really love Pit's posing and expression, its just wonderful and Palutena looks really beautiful! The hair is so...

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Wow~ This came out pretty well. Even if you didn't shade in Pit he still looks great posing with his arrow |D

Palutena looks amazing D: !

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No wai, it looks pretty complete to me. I love old school pit's look you do!

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Palutena seems confused by all the goings on...

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OMG!
This is so awesome!
I love this yesyes.
Pit is hot here and Palutena is so beautiful
Plus, this reminds me Saint Seiya:I love Saint Seiya, so, this is a good thing I guess yesyes!

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"No è ovvio."

really nice. i thiink if you make Pit a wee tiny bit tranpsernt youll be able to see platunea;s role better. but i still love it :3

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